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by Choi
Mon Mar 20, 2017 6:11 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 25: Extraction (UPDATED W/PART 2!)
Replies: 12
Views: 201

Re: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 25: Extraction (UPDATED W/PART 2!)

That was a great chapter! Don't have time to go super in depth, but I wanted to make sure to give you a few pieces of feedback: - Your writing has improved dramatically. This chapter is tighter and the dialogue flows really well. - The inquisitors are a formidable force in your series. Killing a fe...
by Choi
Thu Mar 02, 2017 10:40 am
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Alliance Intelligence "Production Blog"
Replies: 60
Views: 2257

Re: Alliance Intelligence "Production Blog"

Some previews for the next chapter:

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by Choi
Thu Feb 02, 2017 11:29 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 25: Extraction (UPDATED W/PART 2!)
Replies: 12
Views: 201

Re: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 25: Extraction

https://c3.staticflickr.com/9/8548/28533772794_93dc2aa584_z.jpg -In the confusion after the initial attack, Shade races towards the group of rebels hidden in the rocks nearby. ------“It’s a trap! Get to the ship now!” https://c5.staticflickr.com/9/8015/29050082692_b8b4c70a37_z.jpg -Col. Scarra’s pi...
by Choi
Fri Jan 27, 2017 2:41 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 25: Extraction (UPDATED W/PART 2!)
Replies: 12
Views: 201

Re: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 25: Extraction

Thanks a ton for the feedback! It's great to know you all are still enjoying the story! Part 2 of this chapter should be available within the next few days, before I head back for Spring semester. And as for the shoulder-gear on Sgt. O'Hara, that's from the TCW Bounty Hunters battle pack, it came wi...
by Choi
Thu Jan 05, 2017 11:20 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 25: Extraction (UPDATED W/PART 2!)
Replies: 12
Views: 201

Re: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 25: Extraction

Read about half way through, and thought it was flowing really well - will catch up on the second half soon. Also - can't help but ask, but do you need a new Cracken head? I might have an extra that I can send your way. :wink: Interesting story! I must confess I was a bit confused by everything but...
by Choi
Fri Dec 23, 2016 7:24 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 25: Extraction (UPDATED W/PART 2!)
Replies: 12
Views: 201

Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 25: Extraction (UPDATED W/PART 2!)

KEY CHARACTERS https://c7.staticflickr.com/9/8029/29122147766_18d5aef23e_q.jpg Airen Cracken: A top agent in the Rebel Alliance's Intelligence branch, Col. Cracken has been a major figure in the fight against the Empire for years, ever since he and his close knit team left their home planet of Cont...
by Choi
Thu Dec 22, 2016 10:49 am
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Will of the Force: KOTOR #12 The Final Lesson
Replies: 16
Views: 305

Re: Will of the Force: KOTOR #12 The Final Lesson

Excellent chapter and a great conclusion to this particular story! It will be interesting to see what happens to the characters from here out, and how Bastilla grapples with her actions. Really great, exciting stuff all around! :D
by Choi
Tue Dec 20, 2016 1:01 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 24: The Emperor's Hand (Updated with Part 2!)
Replies: 7
Views: 210

Re: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 24: The Emperor's Hand (Updated with Part 2!)

I don't mind that Thaal wasn't around very long. He was a cool character and was fun while it lasted, but there is SO many characters and stories it would have been hard to integrate another one. I really did like his attitude and his signature chain weapon, though - very awesome stuff. I was very ...
by Choi
Tue Dec 20, 2016 12:45 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Alliance Intelligence "Production Blog"
Replies: 60
Views: 2257

Re: Alliance Intelligence "Production Blog"

So, I have some bad news. While I was away at college my family computer finally died, and upon getting a new one, it was discovered that the Photoimpact disc was misplaced during remodeling a year ago. The final two chapters of my saga remain unedited, and while I want to finish them, I'm not sure ...
by Choi
Tue Nov 15, 2016 5:21 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 24: The Emperor's Hand (Updated with Part 2!)
Replies: 7
Views: 210

Re: Alliance Intelligence: Chapter 24: The Emperor's Hand

First off, thanks a TON to those that offered feedback! It's what makes finishing this story worth it! Now, for Part 2: https://c6.staticflickr.com/9/8537/28615103293_25475206b5_z.jpg -Onboard the Dauntless Knight, the young Inquisitors mobile base of operations, blaster bolts fly as Jaig Landow and...
by Choi
Sat Nov 12, 2016 5:45 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Era of Darkness VOL 2: Chapter 6
Replies: 19
Views: 626

Re: Era of Darkness VOL 2: Chapter 6

Really great installment! I really like the diversity of the rebel forces! Sometimes I get a bit confused on who is who, but that probably has to do a lot with my increasingly sporadic reading habits here. I agree with alot of what Lance said. The non-feminine costumes for Dreya are a bit confusing ...
by Choi
Sat Nov 12, 2016 5:37 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Galaxy of Change: Chapter 4
Replies: 7
Views: 377

Re: Galaxy of Change: Chapter 4

This has been a very fun series! Sorry I haven't been able to reply sooner, but I'm really enjoying it!
by Choi
Sat Nov 12, 2016 5:34 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Will of the Force: KOTOR #11 Contrition
Replies: 13
Views: 454

Re: Will of the Force: KOTOR #11 Contrition

Excellent post! I always feel like I should go into more detail, but then I wind up repeating myself a lot. But there were a lot of interesting developments in this chapter. I'm really looking forward to whatever you have planned for next!
by Choi
Sat Nov 12, 2016 5:28 pm
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: A Thousand Generations: Prologue: A Dawn of Two Suns
Replies: 24
Views: 721

Re: A Thousand Generations: Prologue: A Dawn of Two Suns

Great start to a new series! I'm excited to see where this goes!
by Choi
Mon Nov 07, 2016 1:23 am
Forum: Photo Novels
Topic: Alliance Intelligence "Production Blog"
Replies: 60
Views: 2257

Re: Alliance Intelligence "Production Blog"

Hey guys, it's me! I hate that I've been away so long, there's a ton of great looking new series and chapters I can't wait to read and give feedback on, but college life is nothing if not busy! Here's a quick look at Part 2 to "The Emperor's Hand", which I'll have up ASAP, and hopefully fi...

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