UKHistory wrote:Loved this latest edition.
Scenery--from the red clay sand to the junk greeblies strewn across the landscape to the excellent building facades the background allows the story to come alive. Special praise is garnered for the sewer; down to the greenish liquid on the lip of the opening. Wonderful use of the acid rain mech too.
Thanks my friend, I always look forward to your feedback!
The sewer was one of the first things I made for this planet, like 2 years ago - lol! I just now finally got to use it. I was a bit worried some people may not like me using the acid rain walker, but it seems to fit in okay.
UKHistory wrote:Figures: Again the unique look of individual prisoners in orange is really nice. The battle robots using iron man parts, Doctor who, assorted star wars and droids I can't make out are really nice. Would love more recipes on those pieces.
Yeah, lots of different parts and whatnot. I'll try and get some updated recipes together with pics!
UKHistory wrote:Plot: Bold. Be sure to read even the character descriptions as they have been updated. Good mix of action and battle scenes with strong dialogue. Vesla came to the rescue and I thought she might save the day for all. In fact I started to wonder if we might see her more in the future. But alas...it was not meant to be. The quarren gang boss is quite fun and has some superb lines such as follow the fool and something to the effect of all of Enloe's ideas wind up killing his men.
Thanks, and yes I did update those profiles some.
Vesla was a last minute addition - I was ready to start shooting the chapter and realized I didn't have a pilot for the walker. So, I used the female that died in the last chapter, and added a helmet - bingo, new character!
More to come on Atracion, glad it seems like hes' going over well as a new character.
UKHistory wrote:The biggest surprise is the Maker. What is he now? What has he ever been. Loved how his consciousness (visage was your wording) moved from one robot body to another and in fact multiples at once. I must admit the villain was not necessarily grabbing my interest as say our fiendish Baron. That is a character development to start off a Republic Peace officer from Naboo to now an evil minion of the Emperor. But the Maker's story is one that needs to be understood. Looking forward to knowing about the dwellers. (edited; forgot to mention them the first go around.)
The Maker... heh heh... I've been waiting for a while to show that he's not really in that body. I will show some backstory to him in the next chapter and hopefully I can convey it properly.
The dwellers will be in the next chapter too - I have an idea, just need to figure out how I'm going to accomplish it the right way. I have a very specific alien look for them that I am trying to create... different from anything really seen before.
UKHistory wrote:So the questions continue to build: 1) How long will Enloe be here? 2) What will the outside world be like once he does escape? 3) Will Freelo have changed much? 4) What possible Solo or Rebels characters might Enloe meet when he does leave? I can't even ask what about Alyssa and Calden; I am thinking Calden is going to be a real imperial goose stepper.
1) - Rykrof should have 1-2 more chapters on the planet
2) - Things will be a bit different on the outside world, especially for him
3) - Freelo will have matured some more, but will still be very recognizable
4) - Rykrof will become involved with a canon character, and I promise it won't feel forced or too convenient - it will make sense
5) - Alyssa and Caldin... they will be around too, and their characters are going to evolve... they fully believe Rykrof is dead
Again - thank you for the comments and feedback, I so much appreciate it!!