"New Friends: A Mandalorian Chronicle" - All new (Short!) Photonovel!!

Lance Quazar

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Presenting, an all-new photonovel short story! I took the pictures for this one way back in 2022 when the Razor Crest was pretty new. Only took me three years to edit and post!

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darthvlad

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Intriguing. Only critique would be that you double posted one frame ("You stop wasting time...). Can't wait to see the next installment.
 
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Lance Quazar

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Intriguing. Only critique would be that you double posted one frame ("You stop wasting time...).
Thanks! Fixed. I accidentally doubled up that panel and deleted a different one!
Can't wait to see the next installment.
This is a self-contained short story, there is no next installment! :)
 

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Excellent. Action, adventure, a surprise ending…Everything you need in a self contained story! The effect you used for the gas is great too.

It’s really only missing a certain muscle bound RFT!
 
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Lance Quazar

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Excellent. Action, adventure, a surprise ending…Everything you need in a self contained story! The effect you used for the gas is great too.

It’s really only missing a certain muscle bound RFT!
Thank you! But Big Tony is impervious to knock-out gas, so his inclusion would have given away the game!
 
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