The 11th Trial: DESOLATION

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Ok all - thanks as always for the support and feedback - new chapter is finally here!

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Tartaaris...for centuries, the Outer Rim world prided itself as a haven for smugglers.



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But the planet became a brutal battleground during the final stages of the Clone Wars.



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Deemed a galactic disaster sector, it was abandoned before the Empire began utilizing the planet as a dumping ground...



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...and established Tartaaris as an undisclosed penal colony for former Separatists and other undesirables.



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Over time, a hierarchy of prison gangs has risen within the prisoner ranks...



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...led by a former slave trader known as Atracion.



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As the malefactors throughout the wasteland struggle to survive, they are constantly being watched by an enigmatic observer...



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...and hunted by mysterious droids.



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The planet is consumed by the stench of death.



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It has been many years now since Rykrof Enloe was captured by the Empire...



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...as he now calls this festering junkyard his home.



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The Imperial ration drops are the only reliable form of sustenance...



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...but they have become infrequent at best...



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...forcing Rykrof to constantly explore new territory.



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This extreme lifestyle has made Rykrof Enloe a changed man...



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...he now lives for one sole purpose...



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...revenge.



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Rummaging through the remains of a crashed Republic gunship, he spots something in the debris...



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...he jumps down to grasp it...



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...an E-5 blaster!



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He looks back to ensure he has not been followed...



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...then grasps the weapon!



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But as expected, the power source has been exhausted.



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Rykrof is just about to leave the wreck when he feels a strange sensation.



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The hairs on the back of his neck stand up and he feels a subtle compulsion - KEEP LOOKING!



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Nudged by this sensation, he approaches a broken down astromech droid.



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Almost without thinking, he feels compelled to remove the debris leaning on the dome of the droid...



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Freed from the wreckage, a hatch on the droid ejects a cylindrical object!



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Could it be...?



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A lightsaber?



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His heart pounding uncontrollably, Rykrof presses the igniter switch...



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...and the weapon hisses to life!



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Holding the weapon, a strange feeling spreads throughout his body...
...his mother was a Jedi of the Republic...



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...her gift with the Force was not passed onto him; or so he has always been told.
But for all the tribulations he has survived, Rykrof has begun to have his doubts...




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Most men, through his experiences, would have died one hundred times.
Did his father lie to him? Does part of his mother's gift run through his veins?



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"YOU!" a raspy voice sneers, startling Rykrof.
Turning around, Rykrof sees a pair of penal colony prisoners approaching him; a brute Katrillian flanked by a human.



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"You're not supposed to be here! You're trespassing!"



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"What's that you're holding?"



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"Looks fancy; whatever it is," the Katrillian's companion says.



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"This?"



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"I'm not really sure," Rykrof lies.
"Just more junk; I guess."



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"Hand it over."



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"It's not anything worth taking," Rykrof shrugs.



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"Besides, it's mine."



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"Kill him!"



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"Dammit!" Rykrof curses...



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...before striking the reptilian alien dead!



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The other assailant then swiftly strikes Rykrof down!



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"Insolent slug," he spits...



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...before a laser blast slams into his skull!



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"What the...?"



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"Settle down," an old man smiles.
"Don't be afraid."



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"Whoever you are, thank you," Rykrof says.



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"Don't thank me just yet," the old man insists.



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"All this commotion won't go unnoticed."



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"We've got to get far away from here."



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Excellent Chewie, excellent! This chapter feels "different" somehow. It's more deliberate than usual and it's one dimensional. Also the writing is more sophisticated (which is not to say that your earlier writing is unsophisticated!) which really lets us grasp Rykrof's longstanding boredom and lack of anything interesting happening for him over these years on that rock. The photography and the sets are phenomenal as always. I was hoping we could see more of his day to day existence though, like where the prisoners live and stuff, the barracks and what not. Maybe next chapter? I'm thinking he's going to be there for a while lol. I found his lethargy against his two aggressors to be uncharacteristic as well, those years there have him pretty beaten down. Hopefully that lightsaber will wake him up! I'm super excited about this arc, I really hope you've got the next part almost ready because it's just not fair to tease us this way again :) Congrats!
 
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Great new chapter! The planet looks appropriately gritty and the "new" look for Rykrof is excellent for the setting. So many questions to answer...
 
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Yes, this was a great new chapter in Enloe's Story. I like how this has started out. Great customs, and great sets as well. This is going to be a fun journey with Rykrof.
 
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Love it!

This chapter was short, but oh so sweet. The prison planet environment is sensational, one of your most atmospheric dioramas of all time. You really get a sense of the death and desperation that are all around.

And the Rykrof custom is similarly bleak and horrible to behold. We really believe this is a changed man, a shadow of the former hero.

A great start, some fun twists here. Wasn't sure if Rykrof's Jedi heritage would ever come up again - curious to see how that all plays out!

Really love the customs, especially the mysterious man who rescues Rykrof. Is that a Hobbit figure head? An awesome choice for a long-time prisoner.

Love that everyone has matching orange jumpsuits. easily sells the "prison planet" vibe, but you got some great variety here with the tubby Ice Cream Maker guy body or the open shirt from Galen Marek, etc.

The visuals are terrific all around!

And the story, though brief, definitely hooks us in. As always, can't wait to see more!

There's a definite Count of Monte Cristo vibe happening! A wrongfully imprisoned hero (betrayed by a former friend, no less), a brutal prison sentence and help from a mysterious fellow prisoner.

I hope you continue this thread. Would be cool to have a transformed Rykrof return to a galaxy that thinks he's long dead and has moved on.

Cool, cool, cool!
 
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I really liked this chapter! I read it first and then just looked at the pictures a second time. While I was mostly just looking at your diorama, the photos themselves tell the story, even without the text.
Great job. I'm on tenterhooks for the next installment.
 
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Knocked it out of the park, as always Chewie!!! :mrgreen:

I've looked at this installment several times now, and the most standout thing is definitely the diorama and custom figure work. Both definitely capture the idea of a super desolate world, and that life is hard there.

As always, your story is great too. The reader can quickly appreciate the change which the character has gone through, and that the jump in time has impacted the story quite a bit. This chapter did seem to go by super quick, but I was also scrolling pretty fast to see the next frame, again and again. :lol: I've always loved the idea of Imperial prisons, so this chapter (and the zombie one from way back) is pretty much tugging on my heart strings. :p

The old man at the end is also really cool. He reminds me of Riddick when Toombs finds him on UV6...Man I wish they would have made figures and vehicles from those movies...

Anyway, great chapter as always man! Is it too soon to look forward to the next installment?
 
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Sorry it has taken me so long to reply to this, I really did enjoy it a great deal! Life has been crazy lately, but that is no excuse :oops:

First of, I love the name of the planet, Tartaaris, which is clearly inspired by Tartarus of Greek mythology. Lots of symbolism there, as the planet is a realm of torment and prison for Enloe, as is it's Greek counterpart for the Titans. Plus, its like the Star Wars Australia (penal colony for an Empire's unwanted!). Those gangs are going to turn into complex social institutions and give way to a democracy someday :lol:

The customs and dio work throughout the planet are amazing, I can only imagine how much work went into them! Whatever filter you used on the pictures really compliments the landscape well.

On the story, you did an excellent job of conveying how desperate a man Enloe has become, it feels as if he is a different character than the one we've come to know over the years. That's a good thing, as I think it raises the stakes of the story moving forward. Of course, I'm interested to find out who the mysterious (and very cool!) old man is.

Hope we get to see more Trials soon, your series is always a blast!
 
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Darth Kikinou":301w2a3t said:
Excellent Chewie, excellent! This chapter feels "different" somehow. It's more deliberate than usual and it's one dimensional. Also the writing is more sophisticated (which is not to say that your earlier writing is unsophisticated!) which really lets us grasp Rykrof's longstanding boredom and lack of anything interesting happening for him over these years on that rock. The photography and the sets are phenomenal as always. I was hoping we could see more of his day to day existence though, like where the prisoners live and stuff, the barracks and what not. Maybe next chapter? I'm thinking he's going to be there for a while lol. I found his lethargy against his two aggressors to be uncharacteristic as well, those years there have him pretty beaten down. Hopefully that lightsaber will wake him up! I'm super excited about this arc, I really hope you've got the next part almost ready because it's just not fair to tease us this way again :) Congrats!

Hi bud, thanks for reading as always!

Yes, this chapter was more deliberate as it was focused squarely on Rykrof. I had not done that in quite some time, and felt like now was the perfect time to start getting back to basics. I feel this should have been easy read for anyone who hops around the forums, even if they have never read an Enloe story before.

Yeah, not too much interesting has happened to him for a while other than trying to survive in this new environment. You will see a little more daily existence, including prisoner living spaces in a future chapter. I've got another area of the planet designed that looks a bit different than what was shown in this chapter.

He is not getting off this place anytime soon - the lightsaber was something I've wanted to do for a LONG time... since the old series, but I had to find a time to make it "feel right." He does have a connection to the Force, but not quite like a Jedi does. He'll never be making 20 foot leaps, or Force pushing walls down... but he's always had a touch of the Force. I believe Han Solo would call it luck. I'll get more into that in future chapters.

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Choi":3hlm2p22 said:
This was really great! I love the new direction the story has taken and can't wait to see what happens next! And, as always, I am in awe of your incredible diorama work. :D

Cool, I'm glad you liked it and the direction the chapter is taking! The dioramas are fun - the issue with them really comes down to time, and finding a place to store then in-between chapters!

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Starchaser":3swsleds said:
Great new chapter! The planet looks appropriately gritty and the "new" look for Rykrof is excellent for the setting. So many questions to answer...

Thank you - glad you liked it! I even sculpted new hair for Rykrof... which is definitely NOT my strong suit!

I am looking forward to the next chapter. If you liked this one, I think you will like the next one too - (at least I hope)!

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