The 13th Trial - DESPERATE MEASURES - POSTED!

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A new installment in The Enloe Trials is here! Please scroll through, and I look forward to feedback!

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The undisclosed Imperial penal colony on Tartaaris has now been Rykrof Enloe's home for several years.



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The Imperial garrison has prevented any prisoner revolts...



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...and recently intensified prisoner disposals.



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In the midst of it all, Rykrof Enloe has survived this harsh lifestyle for far too long...



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...and is now willing to take desperate measures.



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"I don't understand why you're going in this direction," K3-95 asks.



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"The secret entrance into the Imperial facilty is southeast of here."



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Rykrof ignores the droid as he continues north.



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"We're going the wrong way!"



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"Perhaps this impossible human is losing his hearing?" the droid wonders aloud.



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"...or he's just plain ignorant."



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"That could be it," Rykrof smirks.



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"Oh!" the droid exclaims sarcastically.
"What a privilege! He's speaking to the lowly droid again!"



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"Just stay close to me," Rykrof says.



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"And don't make any sudden moves."



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"Sudden moves? What are you talking about?"



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"This isn't a very safe area..."



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"Hey you! Drop the weapons!"



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"Did you just intentionally get us captured?"



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"Shut up, droid!"



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"The droid is not a threat," Rykrof assures the other prisoner.
"You'll find he can be most useful."



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"Keep your hands where I can see them," the alien growls.



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"I need to see Atracion," Rykrof says cautiously.
"That's the only reason we ventured this way."



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"It's going to be dark soon," he continues.
"I don't think any of us want to be out here when that happens."



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"Right... I'm sure the boss would love to see you," the other prisoner says.



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That night, an eerie glow envelopes the landscape...



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...as the Maker's droids roam through the debris in their search for victims.



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Nearly a dozen kilometers away, the Maker slowly exits the Imperial complex...



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...while the watch guards curiously observe the warden's recent behavior.



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"Sir?" Chief Rolem asks as he approaches the Maker.



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"With the recent spike in prisoner activity, I would not advise for you to..."



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"I have ensured that the prisoner population has dropped low enough to prevent any threats," the Maker interjects.



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"Tell me, what is the status of Prisoner 1067?"



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"Oh, Enloe," the Imperial officer pauses.
"He appears to have been captured by Atracion's gang..."



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"...but still, with the recent prisoner activities, I would recommend the garrison stays on yellow alert."



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"Enloe isn't stupid," the Maker affirms.
"But he's bolder than I expected."



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"What do you mean?"



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"I do not believe he was captured."



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"Enloe is attempting to form an alliance..."



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"...but he has no idea what I have in store for him."



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The next morning, Rykrof can only see pitch black...



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...as he is escorted to the leader of the prison gangs.



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"Steady," a now familiar voice cautions him.



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Rykrof can quickly sense that he has gained an audience.
"Let's see him," a gruff voice commands.



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Rykrof's escort then violently tears his mask off!



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A blurry view of his captors begins to form in Rykrof's eyes...



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...as he realizes he is face to face with the dreaded Atracion!



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"Thanks for the hospitality," Rykrof says.



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"You trespassed into my territory!" Atracion bellows.
"The punishment is execution!"



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"I only came here to cut a deal with you," Rykrof replies.



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"What could you possibly have to offer me that would be worth my time?"



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"Let's gut him and be done with it," one of his men suggests.



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"Yes... we haven't had good meat in forever," the other agrees.



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"Let him talk," the escort argues.



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"Indeed."



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"Who are you?" Atraction demands.
"And what is it you want?"



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"My name is Rykrof Enloe. I'm here to offer a solution to our mutual problem."



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"Enloe?" the Quarren replies.
"...I've heard of you..."



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"...sworn enemy of the Badoo Corba."



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Rykrof then closes his eyes in anticipation of a laser blast...



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"No need to piss yourself," Atracion laughs.
"I'm not going to shoot you."



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"...at least not today."



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"Then I hope we can work together to break off this planet together," Rykrof says.
"If you're willing."



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"And just how do you propose we do that?"



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"I can get us into the Maker's complex," Rykrof explains.
"But I'm going to need my droid."



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"Why the droid?" one of the thugs growls.
"Why's he so important?"



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"Quiet down," Atracion orders his subordinate.



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"My audacious new friend and I have some talking to do..."



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"...in private."



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That's it! The next chapter is coming this Fall. Hope you enjoyed, look forward to reading some thoughts/etc.


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Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next.

I found this chapter a little short, perhaps because I want to read more instantly, but perhaps because not a lot happened.

You manage to pack a lot of info into a shot, so much that even if you removed a third of your photos, I would still know what was going on. I'd be disappointed to have less pictures to look at, but the story would remain intact.
 
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I have read the chapter quickly tonight. So I will come back and give more thoughts later...

1) good photography. I really liked the effect of the quarren being out of focus showing the images from Enloe's perspective. Very nice. Eyes closed. Really good effect.

2) good dialogue. Love the banter between Enloe and the droid. Attraction is well designed as a crime boss. And already an interesting character

3) prison garb. Can't be said enough how individualized the prisoners garb is. Creates a realistic experience in this intergalactic metal purgatory.

4) the maker. Fun new villain. What is its head? Several head I am embarrassed to say that I don't recognize.

5) loved th sets. Some are the new Death Star walls. Others I am not sure

6) badoo corba reference back. Neat.

It is just a treat to read this. I can't wait to see what is next.
 
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Excellent chapter, I love the look of the Maker, Chewie. This chapter seems to be building up to something big, anticipating the next chapter. :D

Great photography and very well written.
 
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A good easy going chapter. It seems a little shorter then your previous work, but works great as a teaser for what is to come I believe? :wink:
You really have some impressive skills, when it comes to making the dioramas, customs and photographing it. It simply amaze me everytime I read a chapter.

I was surprised to see so much of the Makers face, before an actual "face-off" later on, atleast that's what I'm hopeing for will happen :D
 
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Utinniii":23fui5zk said:
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next.

I found this chapter a little short, perhaps because I want to read more instantly, but perhaps because not a lot happened.

You manage to pack a lot of info into a shot, so much that even if you removed a third of your photos, I would still know what was going on. I'd be disappointed to have less pictures to look at, but the story would remain intact.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to share some thoughts. :)

Yeah, it was not a long chapter my any means. About 70-75 frames including the opening crawl. I could have done more frames, but I felt like the chapter was going to get too sidetracked with dialogue/etc. Just didn't see a need and I didn't want the chapter to get too boring.

While this one had no action to speak of, the intent was to propel Rykrof into finally taking some real action. Rather than just trying to take it "a day at a time surviving" he is now doing something bold - attempting to work together with the rough prisoner gang to face off against their Imperial captors.

Again, thanks for the feedback!

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GrandMoffHux14":75353nha said:
Excellent chapter, I love the look of the Maker, Chewie. This chapter seems to be building up to something big, anticipating the next chapter. :D

Great photography and very well written.

Thanks buddy! Glad you are liking the Maker's appearance.

Definitely trying to build up to something bigger here, and a surprise or two as well! I think what is planned for the next chapter will be a bit unpredictable, but cool. At least that's my hope.

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Codaks":19d05h31 said:
A good easy going chapter. It seems a little shorter then your previous work, but works great as a teaser for what is to come I believe? :wink:
You really have some impressive skills, when it comes to making the dioramas, customs and photographing it. It simply amaze me everytime I read a chapter.

I was surprised to see so much of the Makers face, before an actual "face-off" later on, atleast that's what I'm hopeing for will happen :D

Thank you - I really appreciate the feedback and you reading this.

Yep, was not a long chapter. I've kept the past three chapters a bit shorter because I felt like there were good "ending points" for each of these while Rykrof is on the planet and didn't want to draw things out. The next chapter should be a bit longer. Probably 100~ish frames.

The dioramas are probably the most consuming part of it all these days. I try and make them as detailed now as I can, so while photographing, I have more options and less editing to do.

I showed a bit more of the Maker's face here than last time like you indicated. I really struggled with those pics. Get ready for a surprise with him though moving forward. I think it will be fun.

Again - thank you!

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UKHistory":28fjdxcu said:
I have read the chapter quickly tonight. So I will come back and give more thoughts later...

1) good photography. I really liked the effect of the quarren being out of focus showing the images from Enloe's perspective. Very nice. Eyes closed. Really good effect.

2) good dialogue. Love the banter between Enloe and the droid. Attraction is well designed as a crime boss. And already an interesting character

3) prison garb. Can't be said enough how individualized the prisoners garb is. Creates a realistic experience in this intergalactic metal purgatory.

4) the maker. Fun new villain. What is its head? Several head I am embarrassed to say that I don't recognize.

5) loved th sets. Some are the new Death Star walls. Others I am not sure

6) badoo corba reference back. Neat.

It is just a treat to read this. I can't wait to see what is next.


As always, thank you for the support! It always means a lot.

1) Thanks on the photography and the effects with the blurred vision and Rykrof's eyes. Did you notice his teeth in a frame? And on one of the prisoners too? :)

2) Glad you liked the interaction between Rykrof and the droid, and Atracion's design. I like the look of him more now than when first making the custom.

3) Thanks on the prisoner outfits. The one sleeveless guy running from the droid in the opening section is a new custom - I wanted to show someone who hadn't been seen before that looked like he's been through a lot!

4) The Maker's head is a space helmet from Clone Wars Anakin, the face is from a Mezco Jason Voorhees figure. The Imperial officer (Chief Rolem) has a head from Mola Ram from Indiana Jones. Just repainted to look more like an old man.

5) Thanks on the sets, and yeah some are the Space Walls from GTP toys... I used a combo on 3.75" and 6" scale walls for the Maker's scene. The junk is just from lots of vehicles really.

6) Thank you! I hope the next chapter(s) don't disappoint!

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Love the teeth.

Also the first guy is a temple of doom Indy torso. Awesome. The Jason Head is great and really adds a level of diversity to the pieces.
 
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UKHistory":9po26im8 said:
Love the teeth.

Also the first guy is a temple of doom Indy torso. Awesome. The Jason Head is great and really adds a level of diversity to the pieces.

Yep, first guy is an Indy torso like you said. :)

I look forward to showing more on the maker --- I honestly think everyone who reads these is going to be very surprised!

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Darth Kikinou":bazi2iqw said:
Phenomenal, as always! The only flaw is how short it is. Argh! :) All technical aspects are perfect, the customs, the dioramas, the photography, the special effects, the plot, the dialogue... what is there to say? I do wish you'd pick up the pace! But thank you for this, really, awesome.

I posted it on the PN alliance site:
http://photonovelalliance.com/pn/TET/TE ... sures.html

Thanks bud, I am appreciative for the feedback and support!

Yep, not a long chapter but it took forever to make it! These are so time consuming as you know.

Thanks for posting it at Photonovel Alliance!!

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I was wondering if the junk is fixed in place. If not, you can change things up a bit in different shots so locations will be slightly different. Movable walls/Greeblies might also help. I think a few small changes would be enough to double the settings.

You'd have to really plan out your shots for continuity though.
 
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Utinniii":ybq8drig said:
I was wondering if the junk is fixed in place. If not, you can change things up a bit in different shots so locations will be slightly different. Movable walls/Greeblies might also help. I think a few small changes would be enough to double the settings.

You'd have to really plan out your shots for continuity though.

Good question - and in the interest of space and resources, most of that is modular. Very little of it is fixed in place.

Basically, the "ground" area is an insulation board base, with paper mache ground/hills made, and coated in several layers of wood glue, then painted reddish brown. Then a mix of glue and paint added on top, and some sand sprinkled on. That's the part that's "fixed" in place.

After that, the walls and greeblies are all moveable, and I have a lot of sand that can me moved around with a paint brush to try and create the illusion of them walking around in different areas.

The actual "ground" of the planet diorama is only 2x2 feet. You can get them here.

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Chewie,

I'm finally catching up on some feedback and responding to my own! This is the third or forth time I've got to look at this chapter, and I really enjoy it each time. I can't really add much more than what has already been said, but I really love The Maker as a character. The look of him, and just how creepy it must be for anyone to be in his presence. I love stories like that! Same with the feral droids. It would just be so weird to know they were roaming around like that.

As always, I love your sets and photography. Going forward, I can't wait to see more of the Maker and his creations! Plus, I really love the prisoner uniforms. Using the Indiana Jones body for the ripped up one was really a nice touch. :)
 
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Jodo":28kl8non said:
Chewie,

I'm finally catching up on some feedback and responding to my own! This is the third or forth time I've got to look at this chapter, and I really enjoy it each time. I can't really add much more than what has already been said, but I really love The Maker as a character. The look of him, and just how creepy it must be for anyone to be in his presence. I love stories like that! Same with the feral droids. It would just be so weird to know they were roaming around like that.

Thanks bud! Appreciate you taking the time to read, and to share your thoughts. I know how hard it can be to find the time!

I'm glad you like The Maker. I've tried to not share too much about him - part of the fun is allowing for the reader to make up their own mind on his origin, what he really does there, etc. Maybe that makes him more creepy? I don't know. But I kind of have enjoyed limiting his background. That kind of goes for the droids too. But, there will be more shown/explained regarding all of that soon.



Jodo":28kl8non said:
As always, I love your sets and photography. Going forward, I can't wait to see more of the Maker and his creations! Plus, I really love the prisoner uniforms. Using the Indiana Jones body for the ripped up one was really a nice touch. :)

Thanks, I am mostly satisfied with the sets -but never really happy with my photography. I need to get better with lighting. I'm going to experiment a bit more with the next chapter. And thanks on the custom using the Indy body! That one was fun to make.

As always - thanks for your support and feedback Jodo!!

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