The 7th Trial: Veils of Deceit - POSTED!

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I am very thankful to the forum members and readers who have supported me in this series for such a long, long time. The same goes for my fellow staff at Yakface.com, different friends around the community like Jeditempleachives & Imperialshipyards too. I would also be remiss to not mention forum member Lance Quazar, who has for years been happy to talk with me "behind the scenes" before the chapters are posted.

I've also been fortunate enough to purchase some amazing playsets/dioramas that add some great visuals to the series, most notably from Owen Driscoll and forum member EMPIRE.

So again -- thank you readers and forum members all in advance for any comments/feedback -- it's very appreciated!!!



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A lone Imperial Star Destroyer disembarks from the small planet, Dathomir...




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...as Darth Vader makes contact with the Emperor.




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"Greetings, my master. The artifact has been secured."




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"You have done well, Lord Vader," Emperor Palpatine smiles via holo transmission.




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"What of Baron Gere? He was working with the terrorists... and attempting to obtain the relic for his own gains."




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"Men like Gere are useful. For now, a governorship in the Ostara system should satisfy his ambitions."




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"And Enloe's family...?"




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"They are now the property of Baron Gere," the Emperor hisses.




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"I want Kala Mly Shundi's rebel faction eliminated..." he pauses.
"...that will be the end of Rykrof Enloe and his pathetic band of allies."




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"Enloe will soon reveal the location of their hidden base," Vader insists.
"Then I will see to it that they are destroyed."




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On the surface of Dathomir, Rykrof's friends take a moment to rest.




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"This is madness," T-3PO wails.
"I never should have come to this horrible planet with you dreadful people!"




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"We will be leaving soon enough..." Kala Mly Shundi assures the droid.




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"...our transport has arrived."




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The group watches as a rusty Badoo Corba ship slowly descends...




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"Anyone need a lift?" Rykrof asks.




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"It's a miracle," the droid exclaims.
"I've been rescued!"




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Far on the other side of the galaxy, Tylin Gere has arrived on Naboo.




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A pair of Imperial Stormtroopers stand guard outside the residence of Alyssa Enloe...




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...who has been deceived regarding her husband's actions.




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Tylin approaches the Enloe homestead...




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...and eyes the woman of his inner most desires.




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"Alyssa," Tylin frowns, "I'm so sorry with the terrible news I shared earlier about Rykrof."
"I trust you have packed your things for our departure?"




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"I can't just abandon my husband," she insists.




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"But, Rykrof's actions on Dathomir have put you and your son in danger," Tylin objects.
"It's not safe for you here...or for your son. There's no future with Rykrof any longer."




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"I... have been granted ultimate authority of the Ostara System," Tylin continues as Alyssa sharply looks away.
"You must come with me, so I can protect you."




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"Don't make me do this the hard way."




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"We'll go with you," she concedes.
"But, first I need to explain this to Caldin."



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"Inform my shuttle to prepare for departure at 1800 hours," Tylin gleefully informs his men.




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"Mom?" Caldin shouts as he jumps off the couch.
"What's the Imperial Baron doing out there?"




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"Sweetheart, we need to talk," she replies.




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"About what?" the boy asks.
"Listen to me," his mother says, "We need to gather our belongings. We'll be leaving here for a while with Tylin."




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"I'm so sorry, but your father can't come with us right now."




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"Somehow, I already knew... he's never with us..."




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"I HATE him."




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Meanwhile, the remote world known as Banyss receives important visitors...




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As Rykrof and his band of allies have arrived to meet with Kala Mly Shundi's rebel faction.




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"Now, that's a piece of junk," one of the troopers observes.




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The ship slowly descends...




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...as a small welcoming committee prepares to greet their guests.




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"It's good to see you all," Kala announces as the shuttle's hatch opens.




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"Welcome back, Master Shundi," Ambassador Sulo smiles.




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"We were so sorry to hear of your experience on Dathomir."




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"Oh, it's so good to be back on a civilized planet," T-3PO declares.




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"Traedon said there is a mechanic here who will be able to mend you back together," Freelo smiles.




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"So, this is your base?" Rykrof asks as he observes the outpost.



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"Yes, and we are quite safe from the Empire here," Ambassador Sulo smiles.
"Come with me; there is someone who would like to see you."




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While Rykrof and the others follow the ambassador, Freelo and T-3PO are escorted to meet with the rebel faction's chief mechanic.




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"How long has this base been running?" Freelo asks.




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"Pretty much since right after the war ended," the trooper tells him.




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"There's your guy," he points out.
"Talk to him about your droid."




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"This doesn't look very impressive," Freelo observes.




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"Well, it has to be an improvement over my current situation," T-3PO retorts.




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"Ah, dropping off some scrap?" an overweight Gotal asks in a raspy voice.




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"Scrap? What are you talking about?" T-3PO demands.




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"Wait..." the droid pauses.




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"You're not a repairman!"




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"I beg to differ," the Gotal growls.
"This here protocol unit was dropped off last week looking almost as bad as you!"




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"What have you done to him?" T-3PO cries.
"He looks hideous!"




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"How much is this going to cost?" Freelo inquires.




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"Freelo Macklar!" T-3PO shouts.
"You should be ashamed of yourself!"




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"My master will gladly pay your fees, provided I am properly repaired."




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"I make do with what parts I have lying around," the Gotal grunts.




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"No exceptions!"




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"It looks like things are settled then," Freelo smiles.
"I'll be back to check on him in a couple days."




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Nearby, Ambassador Sulo leads the group to the faction's leader.
"...as Kala shared with you earlier, there are other Jedi survivors here. We also have two surface stations like this one, and our power source is subterranean."




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"And we are constantly enhancing our defenses."




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"Ah," he stops.
"There he is."




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"Rykrof Enloe!" former Republic Senator, Tame Heem, shouts.
"What a relief it is to see you alive!"




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"Tame Heem..." Rykrof says in disbelief.
"The traitor."




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"You have a lot of explaining to do," Rykrof says sharply to his Jedi friend.




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Sensing Rykrof's anger, former Jedi, Clorri Lislo, clutches her blaster...




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"I realize past events may give you pause to trust me," the Ithorian calmly responds.
"But lest us not forget; you, yourself, faithfully served Palpatine for years."




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Ignoring the Ithorian, Rykrof stares fiercely into the eyes of Kala Mly Shundi.
"Why didn't you tell me you were working with him?"




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"No matter the past, we are all bound by our common enemy," Kala replies.




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"Hey now, I'm the biggest asshole here," Traedon smirks.
"If you can work with me, you can work with anybody."




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"Yeah? Well the leader of your group turned on me at the end of the war and almost got me and Freelo both killed."




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"I understand you are deeply concerned for your family," Tame says, changing the subject.
"We have an agent already tracking their location," he offers.




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"Protecting them is my responsibility," Rykrof says as he distances himself from the group.




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"And you people stand no chance against the Empire."




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The following morning, a native Dak'idyl passes the perimeter of the rebel base.




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Moments later, it becomes startled and scampers into the distance...




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...as Rykrof enters the outskirts of the wilderness.




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Hoping to clear his head, he can't help but reflect on recent events...




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...the destruction of his home...




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...the murder of his father...




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...the abduction of his family...




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...a horrifying experience on Dathomir...




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...a deal with Darth Vader...




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...and a hopeless decision he must now make.




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"This choice is yours, and yours alone," Kala Mly Shundi says.




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Rykrof remains silent as his Jedi friend approaches him...




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...he then turns his back to Kala.




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"I've failed everyone," he confesses.




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"Self-doubt has become your weakness," Kala tells him.




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"Vader has forced my hand," Rykrof replies.
"But you already knew this whole time, didn't you?"




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"As you seek answers to your dilemma, you have become open to the Force like never before," Kala explains.
"This has allowed for your thoughts to betray you."




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"And now you think I'm going to betray you and everyone here," Rykrof laments.




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"Vader never expected for you to activate the device," Kala informs him.
"It has a self-activation mechanism triggered by planetary gravitational pulls."




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"Oh no..."




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"Vader and his forces are already on their way," Kala says.




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"...we don't have much time."



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Totally stoked about this! Please don't post any previews, I won't be able to resist looking! When do you reckon you'll release it? Thanks!
 

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dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you've reach a whole new level with your dio's and camera work.
the amount of work u've put into those outside shots especially at the end are so tediously done i have a lack of words to describe how blown away i am. just amazing.

Question on the last Rykrof custom, how well does the Han torso go with the RFT? I really like the look for my own custom.

as always keep up the fanastic work.
i may not have time to comment but i'm always lurking/looking/loving ur work
 

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these photonovels of yours are the kind that I can read again and again and see something new every time

everything looks just incredible
the blue power droid made me smile big

another job well done!
 
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Wow wow wow. You just continue to amaze. Your skill just keeps growing, both with your customizing and dio building (not to mention your new painted backgrounds) and your storytelling.

And that cliffhanger! Aargh! I can't wait to see what happens next!
 

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Terrific! A feast of wonderful customs and dioramas along with great camera work and a solid script with good dialogue. Quite a lot of things going on there, and I really like that you brought back the Tame Heem character, good to see him again. Not sure where you're going with the Rykrof/Caldin plot, gonna be trouble when they see one another again! Feels awkward, the idea of that meeting is cringeworthy. Caldin is going to sign up to be a stormtrooper in a few years, isn't he? That'd be some defiance right there lol. Poor Rykrof, the weight of the universe on his shoulders. When's the next chapter coming out? This slow drip is unbearable!! haha thanks for sharing this is great!
 

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YakPurge":3hdja6vj said:
dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you've reach a whole new level with your dio's and camera work.
the amount of work u've put into those outside shots especially at the end are so tediously done i have a lack of words to describe how blown away i am. just amazing.

Question on the last Rykrof custom, how well does the Han torso go with the RFT? I really like the look for my own custom.

as always keep up the fanastic work.
i may not have time to comment but i'm always lurking/looking/loving ur work

Hi there old buddy, thanks for taking the time to still read these and chime in with some thoughts. It means a lot!

The last scene is one that really came together better than I thought it would -- I actually shot that scene three different times. The last take seemed to really stand out more than previous takes for whatever reason. I'm glad because I felt the chapter needed a little something "extra" at the end that stood out from the rest of the chapter.

On the Rykrof custom, I made that almost 2 years ago and have been saving it for this chapter -- so my memory may be foggy -- but I don't believe I had any trouble swapping the parts. Simple boil-n-pop, if I recall correctly.

Again -- thank you for taking a few minutes to read this and share some thoughts. I recognize that it's harder and harder to keep the attention of people for this sort of medium. My work on these is harder than ever, and the amount of time I dedicate to them is kind of ridiculous... :)

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Another excellent chapter!!! A change of pace from the previous action/peril filled chapters, in terms of how very story driven this is, which I think is a good thing!

Enloe has obviously been through a lot recently and I think this episode allowed you to deal with some of the fallout from that. He has a great deal of inner turmoil, which you captured expertly! He's been fighting a long time and it seems he's nearing the breaking point...

Freelo, T3, and Traedon are excellent supporting characters, as always, and bring levity to your series in truly SW fashion! The obese Gotal sequence was delightful! Kala has easily become my favorite character in your series. We've watched him grow as much as Enloe and he plays such a vital role. He's Obi-Wan Kenobi-esc, without being boring or unoriginal.

Your sets are truly magnificent, you capture such a diverse set of environments (Jungle, Star Destroyer, Naboo, and Steampunk cityscape) in an authentic manner worthy of a professional production.

After so many years, it is awesome to see how much potential your series still has! I for one look forward to many, many more years of Enloe's Trials!!!
 

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Outstanding job, but that goes without saying! All of the dioramas, customs, backdrops, everything is fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter, to find out what happens to the rebels and Caldin-Rykrof relationship! I'll be eagerly anticipating the next chapter :D
 

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Grimace":8ytbyikw said:
these photonovels of yours are the kind that I can read again and again and see something new every time

everything looks just incredible
the blue power droid made me smile big

another job well done!

Thank you Grimace, I always appreciate your words of support. It means a lot to me.

Glad you liked the blue power droid. He's definitely a tribute to the original Kenner design.

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my kind of scum":1387yj6l said:
Wow wow wow. You just continue to amaze. Your skill just keeps growing, both with your customizing and dio building (not to mention your new painted backgrounds) and your storytelling.

And that cliffhanger! Aargh! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.

Glad that you liked how this all looked, the painted backgrounds really help give an illusion of depth to a degree. Not as much as I'd like, but better than what I was doing 5 years ago.

The cliffhanger will pretty much be short lived - the Empire is right on their doorstep. Bad things are going to happen to the group. Shouldn't be quite as long of a wait for the next chapter as this one, because I already have most of the sets built. I need to make one more set probably, and finish up a couple more customs - then things should be set!

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Darth Kikinou":2f8uvxcr said:
Terrific! A feast of wonderful customs and dioramas along with great camera work and a solid script with good dialogue. Quite a lot of things going on there, and I really like that you brought back the Tame Heem character, good to see him again. Not sure where you're going with the Rykrof/Caldin plot, gonna be trouble when they see one another again! Feels awkward, the idea of that meeting is cringeworthy. Caldin is going to sign up to be a stormtrooper in a few years, isn't he? That'd be some defiance right there lol. Poor Rykrof, the weight of the universe on his shoulders. When's the next chapter coming out? This slow drip is unbearable!! haha thanks for sharing this is great!

Thank you -- I was feeling pretty good about the dioramas for this new chapter thanks to the great building sets I was able to purchase from forum member EMPIRE - those went a long way toward making the rebel faction base.

The Star Destroyer scene also turned out better than I expected, of course most of that scene is from the set I bought from Owen Driscoll many years ago - the back walls are from the modular wall sets from Galactic Merchants. It's the first time I've used their stuff in one of my stories.

I was a little hesitant to show Dathomir again because I didn't want the environment to get confused with the forest area on Banyss, but now I think it turned out right. There's a bit of similarities between the two forest sets but I think enough differences to make them distinct.

I'm very glad you liked the script and dialogue. That means a lot to me because that's really the toughest part. I'm trying very hard to intertwine the character stories and make it all "make sense" without it being too complex or hard for readers to follow. It's very easy to "get lost" in what's going on and make it too complicated for readers to care -- so I've tried to limit the number of characters and simplify the story arc.

The Rykrof/Caldin storyline will take a back seat for a while, but there will be more to come when Caldin is older.

I was glad to bring Tame Heem back! He was actually from the very first story back a decade ago when Rykrof and Tylin, when they were young peace officers, sent on a mission to find Tame Heem, who had been captured by the Trade Federation. And Rykrof has a mixed relationship with Tame - during the clone wars, Tame sided with Dooku for a short time, then later after Order 66, he was forced by Palpatine to set Rykrof up, in the final chapter of the original series.

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^ It's fun looking back at that! I can't believe it was already 4 years ago... yikes. I remember being very stressed out about that diorama!

Darth Kikinou, thank you once again for helping keep me motivated to make more chapters and to try and improve -- and for your awesome site... http://www.photonovelalliance.com

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Another wonderful Story Chewie. There's so much in your photo novels....great new customs, new Dioramas, landscapes, Backgrounds, and super dialogue and storytelling all around. There's so much depth to These characters and even characters that have a lot of depth already have some great personal development as well. I really like how Rykrof is faced with so many difficult decisions and no matter what he chooses to do he tries to remain loyal to himself and his Family. Things don't always work out for him, but he keeps trying to do the right Thing.....a real hero.

PS. Bob would love your mountains
 

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Choi":tjiql58p said:
Outstanding job, but that goes without saying! All of the dioramas, customs, backdrops, everything is fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter, to find out what happens to the rebels and Caldin-Rykrof relationship! I'll be eagerly anticipating the next chapter :D

Thanks for the note, it's pretty ridiculous how long it takes to create all the difference scenes and all that. I'm glad that you like how it came together.

Next chapter will be posted a lot faster than this one was since most of the scenes are already done!

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CloneCrazy":d0i2jdfm said:
Another excellent chapter!!! A change of pace from the previous action/peril filled chapters, in terms of how very story driven this is, which I think is a good thing!

Thank you - and yes, this was no action here. Not even one laser blast. I think it's the first time I've made a story with no action. If felt that given what had just happened on Dathomir, and what's in store for the next chapter (all out assault on the rebel base), that now was the time to focus solely on the plot.


CloneCrazy":d0i2jdfm said:
Enloe has obviously been through a lot recently and I think this episode allowed you to deal with some of the fallout from that. He has a great deal of inner turmoil, which you captured expertly! He's been fighting a long time and it seems he's nearing the breaking point...

Yes - you are right. Much has happened in the series to him recently, probably more in the first 6 installments of this series in a way than in the previous series. Lost his father, a close friend, his home, family taken, disaster on Dathomir, etc. He is near a true breaking point and we will see it finally happen in the next chapter.


CloneCrazy":d0i2jdfm said:
Freelo, T3, and Traedon are excellent supporting characters, as always, and bring levity to your series in truly SW fashion! The obese Gotal sequence was delightful! Kala has easily become my favorite character in your series. We've watched him grow as much as Enloe and he plays such a vital role. He's Obi-Wan Kenobi-esc, without being boring or unoriginal.

I'm really glad you feel that way. I've tried hard to make those characters important players in their own right, with personalities, etc. As for Kala - I hate to say but the time may be approaching when he isn't able to aid Rykrof further. I have an important decision to make with his character. As much as I am attached to the character, I recognize that the group can't always survive every encounter -- and what they face in the next chapter will be their hardest challenge yet. Someone major will not survive - it could even be Freelo. At this point the only character that is still safe is Rykrof.


CloneCrazy":d0i2jdfm said:
Your sets are truly magnificent, you capture such a diverse set of environments (Jungle, Star Destroyer, Naboo, and Steampunk cityscape) in an authentic manner worthy of a professional production.

After so many years, it is awesome to see how much potential your series still has! I for one look forward to many, many more years of Enloe's Trials!!!

Thanks so much for the extremely kind thoughts, and your detailed review -- your notes made me feel better about what I'm doing here, and caused me to get off my butt last night and start working on some more things for the next chapter. :)

Again - THANK YOU. :)

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Trooper31":1kbxuzac said:
Another wonderful Story Chewie. There's so much in your photo novels....great new customs, new Dioramas, landscapes, Backgrounds, and super dialogue and storytelling all around. There's so much depth to These characters and even characters that have a lot of depth already have some great personal development as well. I really like how Rykrof is faced with so many difficult decisions and no matter what he chooses to do he tries to remain loyal to himself and his Family. Things don't always work out for him, but he keeps trying to do the right Thing.....a real hero.

PS. Bob would love your mountains

Thanks for the kind words old buddy.

These things take so much time and effort, it's wonderful to read the thoughts from my friends in the hobby.

Rykrof does try and do the right thing, but may start going down a path that is uncharacteristic of him soon. I've got some decisions to make in terms of how things play out.

And thanks on the Bob Ross comment... ha ha... his paintings have helped me so much in realizing that I can add depth to my scenes. I still watch his shows quite often.

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