The 9th Trial - THE FALL OF BANYSS - POSTED!

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It's time for a new adventure in the story of Rykrof Enloe... read through, and please be sure to share your thoughts!


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Banyss... once the perfect escape from the watchful eyes of the Empire...



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...and a sanctuary for a small Rebel cell...



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...until Rykrof Enloe unwittingly revealed the planet's location to Darth Vader!



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Former Senator Tame Heem was promptly escorted to safety...



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...but, before the faction could organize a full evacuation, Darth Vader's Imperial forces moved in...



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...swiftly dispatching troops...



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...and crushing the Rebel forces!



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As the remaining survivors now fight for their very lives, the Dark Lord exits his shuttle.



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"Lord Vader," the commanding field officer says, stiffening his posture.
"The rebels are on the run. It won't be long before these scum are all destroyed."



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"Where are the Jedi?" Vader demands, dismissing the ambitious officer's greeting.



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"Just as you ordered, we have them... contained, my Lord."



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"How many are there?"



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"There's two of them... Sector Nine," Vlarra smiles.
"I have a squad of my best men ready to escort you."



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"I do not require an escort," Vader hisses as he walks past the ambitious officer.



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Just then, Baron Tylin Gere cautiously exits the shuttle.



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"I was not notified that you were part of this mission..."



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"...welcome to Banyss, Baron."



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"The pleasure is all yours, I'm sure," Tylin snidely replies.
"You know why I'm here. Have you located Enloe?"



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"As expected, he's refused to surrender... Enloe's still out there; and he's all yours."



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"He is no longer of any use to me. I do not want him leaving this planet alive."



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Nearly a kilometer away, Rykrof watches as the rebel soldiers are overrun...



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...and manages to slip away from the advancing troopers.



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Throughout the complex, the rebels have begun to capitulate...



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...and are rounded up by the invading army.



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However, some of the Stormtroopers still encounter resistance...



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...as the Jedi refuse to give in!



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"Be mindful," Attpo Teacro tells Clorri Lislo.
"Our attackers have positioned us in this area intentionally..."



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"...they are setting us up."



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"Setting us up for what?" Clorri shouts above the blaster fire.



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She then realizes what is about to happen...



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...as the laser blasts cease.



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Darth Vader then approaches the two Jedi.



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"Use caution," Attpo advises his companion as the two gauge this new threat.



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"There is no escape..." the Dark Lord hisses before turning his head towards Clorri.



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"Don't force me to destroy you."



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With Clorri incapacitated, Vader turns his attention to the senior Jedi...



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...feeding on his opponent's fear.



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"Kala Mly Shundi has abandoned you..."



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Vader then summons the Force...



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...violently snapping the Jedi's neck!



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Nearby, Rykrof carefully moves among the shadows as the Imperials round up their captives...



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Keeping his distances, he watches as an Imperial officer speaks to a pair of prisoners.



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His stomach drops as he identifies the officer...



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...Tylin Gere!



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"We don't know who you're talking about," one of the rebel troopers pleads.



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"Rykrof Enloe is his name!" Tylin barks.
"He was here! He's the one that led us to this wretched planet!"



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"We're just soldiers doing our job," the other rebel says.
"We don't know the names of everyone that comes through this place."



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"Very well then," Tylin replies reasonably.
"To your feet, soldier. Now, tell me instead, who is the leader of this facility?"



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"You mean Imperial Intelligence didn't brief you on that already?" the prisoner smiles.



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"These two know nothing," Tylin says to the nearest Stormtrooper.



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"Kill them both."



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The Imperials then open fire on the helpless prisoners...



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...ending the lives of both men.



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Horrified, Rykrof's concern then shifts to the well-being of his friends...



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...who have barely managed to make it out of the complex!



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Making as much distance as they can from the Imperials, Traedon and Freelo sprint through the forest.



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Consumed with guilt, Freelo can't help but question the decision to abandon the fight.
"We should go back," he decides.



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"That would only get us killed," Traedon advises.
"All we can do now is save our own skins... or scales, in your case."



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"Rykrof never would have left us behind..."



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"He was the one who begged me to get you out of there," Traedon reminds him.



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"If you won't come with me, then I'll just have to do this myself," Freelo insists.



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"Don't be an idiot. I've got a shuttle out here," Traedon says.
"We can live to fight another day, unless you and your helper want to try and take on a couple hundred Stormtroopers."



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"My helper?"



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"Oh my, I forgot!"



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"Oh, thank goodness!" T-3PO exclaims.
"I'm no longer in that dreadful battle!"



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"Wait... where's the rest of me?"



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"Come on," Traedon insists as he turns back toward his destination.



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"The ship's right here."



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"I've decided we will go with you," Freelo admits.



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"Good. All we gotta do is wait out the Imperials," Traedon says.
"That'll give me time to figure out our next move."



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Back inside the complex, Clorri summons her weapon!



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"Good," Vader taunts her.



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Her lightsaber then hisses to life!



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"I feel the hatred flowing through you!" the Dark Lord says as the young Jedi attempts to strike him down.



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"But you are weak..."



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"...your connection to the Force is... inadequate."



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Overpowering the young woman, Vader strikes her down!



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Meanwhile, Tylin approaches his landing craft only to find several of the escort troops have been killed...



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"Baron Gere!" the lone surviving Stormtrooper reports.
"We were just ambushed!"



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"Why didn't you report this?"



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"They just struck moments ago," the trooper replies.



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"Well, where are they?" Tylin insists.
"Where are the rebels that did this?"



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"It was Enloe, Sir! He took off around that corner!"



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"I knew it," Tylin growls.
"Find him!"



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Just then, the Stormtrooper shoots Tylin's escort!



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As Tylin turns, he can hardly believe his eyes.



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"You son of a bitch," Rykrof says, aiming his blaster directly at his former friend.
"Get on your knees."



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"Rykrof!" Tylin gasps.
"This is a terrible misunderstanding... you see..."



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"Don't feed me another sack of your lies," Rykrof snarls.



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"Where have you taken Alyssa? And my son?"



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"You have about two seconds before I blast your skull to pieces."



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At that moment, a sizzling laser blast strikes Rykrof!



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He then falls to the ground, lying motionless.



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"Fate has a strange way of working itself out," Tylin smirks as he regains his footing.



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"Rykrof Enloe," Vader observes as he approaches the shuttle.



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"See to it that he survives."



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"But Lord Vader, is that wise?" the Imperial Baron softly objects.



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"He's dangerous. Look at what almost happened."



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"He may be my only link to finding the leaders of this Rebel faction," Vader insists.
"Commander," Vader continues, "have your technicians extract all data from this complex... then burn it to the ground."



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"As you wish, of course, my Lord."



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Tylin then watches helplessly as Rykrof is lifted to his feet.



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"Damn that man," Tylin groans.



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"Fate indeed has a strange way of working itself out, Uncle," Vlarra Gere sneers.



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BUM BUM BUM! Looking forward to the entire chapter Justin; it looks like it's gonna be awesome!!
 

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Jodo":3et6gt51 said:
BUM BUM BUM! Looking forward to the entire chapter Justin; it looks like it's gonna be awesome!!

Thanks bud!

I hope it's one that really goes over well - the photonovel feedback for all of us has really dwindled... gotta keep new fresh things out there, I suppose, and keep supporting each other as we make these.

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Magnificent work once again! The battle sequence is one of your finest, which is no small accomplishment given your previous work. It reminds me of the battle of Rhen Var you did back in Enloe's Clone Wars days. Really beautiful stuff. The lightsaber duel sequence was a treat, very reminiscent of Vader's overwhelming power in Rebels. I love to see the Empire presented as the ruthless and dangerous force you showcase so effectively.

That base set is just fantastic, it feels so authentic to the OT era and radiates Star Wars. Plus, the wooded area is excellent! You did a great job of making it feel unique.

The twist with Gere junior was classic! He's a cool figure and I hope we see more of him!

Your writing, as always, is perfectly paced and fully emersive! Looking forward to seeing where Enloe's adventures take him!
 
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You continue to impress. The pacing in this chapter continues to push along at great speed and the photography gets better all the time (which is impressive considering the high bar that you continue to set for yourself).

The neck-breaking panel almost hurt it looked so real - and it's a surprising (yet realistic) use of Vader's powers.

Not sure how much worse it can get for our heroes, but I feel like you're going to show us.

Slightly off-topic, but I hope some of the characters eventually survive to the sequel trilogy era. We've seen your characters through the prequel lens and the OT lens - would be fun to see some of them interacting with the galaxy under the new republic/resistance/first order...
 

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Just reread this and was struck by how crisp your images are, you've really mastered whatever camera you're using (if you wouldn't mind sharing, what is it?).

I agree, we've gotta see Enloe in the Sequel Trilogy Era! Think of everything he could share with our new generation of heroes!!! If I recall, you made an old man Enloe custom at one point, right? There's still a lot of story between his current situation and the Sequel days, all of which I'm looking forward to seeing!
 

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I looked through this chapter the day you posted it, but have had way too much stuff going on to sit down and actually read through it. I finally had a chance tonight! Overall, I think this is a really good entry. I like that the Jedi went down without much of a fight, because many tim3w fan-fiction (or comics/cartoons) give them way too much power. It's a lot more believable to me that they would could be picked off during this era, as they wouldn't be fully trained or even practiced. On the other hand, I would like to have seen just a bit more of fighting inside the compound during this chapter; this might have bought just a bit more time (like 5-10) frames between Rykrof hiding and then disguising himself.

The bounty hunter continues to be one of my favorite characters, and I like that Freelo decided to stay with him instead of going back immediately. I also LOVE Freelo's backpack, which I didn't expect to open up. It was cool seeing the ship hidden by the netting too. Though it wasn't a huge plot point, I think it gave a nice credence to the fact it was purposefully hidden and not just parked out there. And nice tie in at the end, with the Imperial officer being related to the Baron. I didn't expect that to be coming, though I anticipated a reason for them to dislike each other or at least be in competition with one another!

I can't wait to see where the story takes us now; reading this chapter makes me want to get back to work on my own, LOL.
 

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What a fun episode. Great dialogue and photos as usual Chewie. Love how the baron has a nephew. Greet choice on a villain's head. The way the helmeted Jedi had his neck broke by vader was awesome. Along the lines of when Indy shot the Cairo swordsman love the scene with freely and the droid head. In the back pack. That was so funny. Great cliff hanger with enloe being kept alive vader's orders

That was delicious. I like how the baron showed cowardice. I really wanted Enloe to kill him. But that would have ended the trip real quick

I like how you give characters different looks. The baron has worn red before but my favorite was the long coat and the at at cmdr armor the collar was aloft me wide but overall nicely done I read this on my phone so I look forward to reading it on a bigger screen later this week. Can't wait to see what happens next

The force awakens is going to have to try real hard to be better than your story chewie
 

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Well, that was dark... Vader and The Empire at their finest. Just dont turn into the George RR Martin of the forums and leave some good guys alive at the end ;) I just love the compositions of the shots and the camera angles - I'm catching myself watching it as movie stills, not thinking about the environment and taking it for real. Which means well done job!
 

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Good stuff I really like your backdrops they really help draw the reader (or should I saw viewer?) into the scenes. I liked everything the only thing I thought was just off was the body poses of Clorri Lislo. They looked a little awkward to me in some of the pictures. I know how some figures just never seem to pose right so I just chalked it up to that. Otherwise everything looked fantastic thanks for sharing your work with us.

BTW: Ditto on Vader cracking that guys neck.. Owiee... Even I felt that!
 

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I've gotten behind in posting a bit lately.

Another great chapter in the Enloe Saga Overall. I really like how you're showing the might of the Empire in These. This series is what I would have hoped Rebels could have been. Vader taking down the leftover Jedi and not having them escape. I also liked how the trooper did not hesitate to shoot Rykrof. Obviously, for a certain length of time, the Empire dominated the universe. The Rebels did not spend much of a Chance against the Empire at first, so this fact is really coming out in all of this.

Love the Dioramas as well as the wooded area on this planet.
 

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CloneCrazy":2mxce38d said:
Magnificent work once again! The battle sequence is one of your finest, which is no small accomplishment given your previous work. It reminds me of the battle of Rhen Var you did back in Enloe's Clone Wars days. Really beautiful stuff. The lightsaber duel sequence was a treat, very reminiscent of Vader's overwhelming power in Rebels. I love to see the Empire presented as the ruthless and dangerous force you showcase so effectively.

That base set is just fantastic, it feels so authentic to the OT era and radiates Star Wars. Plus, the wooded area is excellent! You did a great job of making it feel unique.

The twist with Gere junior was classic! He's a cool figure and I hope we see more of him!

Your writing, as always, is perfectly paced and fully emersive! Looking forward to seeing where Enloe's adventures take him!

Hey bud - thanks again for taking the time to read, and provide such detailed feedback. That's a good comparison to the Rhen Var sequence back in the day... probably the most "battles" in the Enloe saga was there and the Banyss fighting. And yeah, Vader and the Empire should be shown as ruthless and a true force to be reckoned with, especially during this era.

Also glad you like the dioramas/etc. The buildings were made by forum member "EMPIRE" - I painted them but he did the hard work in the design/etc. The forest stuff was all hand made by myself.

Vlarra Gere was a fun twist for me! I had considered it sometime back but thought this was the right time to introduce him.

Again, thanks for all your support.

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my kind of scum":2sjkvrak said:
You continue to impress. The pacing in this chapter continues to push along at great speed and the photography gets better all the time (which is impressive considering the high bar that you continue to set for yourself).

The neck-breaking panel almost hurt it looked so real - and it's a surprising (yet realistic) use of Vader's powers.

Not sure how much worse it can get for our heroes, but I feel like you're going to show us.

Slightly off-topic, but I hope some of the characters eventually survive to the sequel trilogy era. We've seen your characters through the prequel lens and the OT lens - would be fun to see some of them interacting with the galaxy under the new republic/resistance/first order...

Thanks my friend for always taking a few minutes to catch up on my work and share some of your thoughts. As you know, feedback means so much!

I'm happy the neck snap seemed to work out. I really wasn't sure what the best way to kill him was for Vader, then thought that seemed like an unexpected (but realistic) way for Vader to take him out. He essentially just toyed with Clorri.

Moving forward, there will be a bit of "going their own ways" for the characters as they have now been split up. The character in for the worst of it all is Rykrof obviously.

I really like the idea of the "sequel trilogy" era - I could see that happening, perhaps, if I can still find the time in the years ahead to make these (which I do hope to do). Rykrof would be well into his 80s at that point, if he were to still be around. His grandchildren could be around then, possibly.

Again, thank you so much!

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CloneCrazy":3o9kjzfk said:
Just reread this and was struck by how crisp your images are, you've really mastered whatever camera you're using (if you wouldn't mind sharing, what is it?).

I agree, we've gotta see Enloe in the Sequel Trilogy Era! Think of everything he could share with our new generation of heroes!!! If I recall, you made an old man Enloe custom at one point, right? There's still a lot of story between his current situation and the Sequel days, all of which I'm looking forward to seeing!

Thanks my friend.. as for the images, I've been manipulating them some in the new series... basically, I blur items I don't want the focus on... it makes the primary subject matter of the image stand out more.

As for Sequel Trilogy Era, anything is possible, so as long as I'm still doing these in 5-10 years... thanks again for the support!

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Jodo":36r85cxi said:
I looked through this chapter the day you posted it, but have had way too much stuff going on to sit down and actually read through it. I finally had a chance tonight! Overall, I think this is a really good entry. I like that the Jedi went down without much of a fight, because many tim3w fan-fiction (or comics/cartoons) give them way too much power. It's a lot more believable to me that they would could be picked off during this era, as they wouldn't be fully trained or even practiced. On the other hand, I would like to have seen just a bit more of fighting inside the compound during this chapter; this might have bought just a bit more time (like 5-10) frames between Rykrof hiding and then disguising himself.

Thanks my friend for the feedback!

I agree, I think there are times that the Jedi are given too much power - if Vader wasn't that much more dominant, there's no way he'd survive all those years between ROTS and ANH hunting down survivors. Against an army of Stormtroopers, alongside some of their own rebel troops, they could hold their own, but once Vader stepped in, it was over.

I get what you mean about wanting a longer battle too though... it just comes down to feeling a story may be getting too long, but also working with whatever photos I have at my disposal. I take tons of pics, but end up with a small percentage I'm actually satisfied with.


Jodo":36r85cxi said:
The bounty hunter continues to be one of my favorite characters, and I like that Freelo decided to stay with him instead of going back immediately. I also LOVE Freelo's backpack, which I didn't expect to open up. It was cool seeing the ship hidden by the netting too. Though it wasn't a huge plot point, I think it gave a nice credence to the fact it was purposefully hidden and not just parked out there. And nice tie in at the end, with the Imperial officer being related to the Baron. I didn't expect that to be coming, though I anticipated a reason for them to dislike each other or at least be in competition with one another!

Yeah, I like the bounty hunter too - Traedon Cusiro. I think early in the series, people could not stand him - which was my intent. His true colors are starting to emerge now. Bounties and the glory that comes with that lifestyle is something he's beginning to regret - he's found he actually cares about people - and in the old series, actually was hired to kill Padme Amidala, which Rykrof stepped in, and arrested him. Traedon never liked Freelo either, but now is starting to have a soft spot for him.

Freelo's backpack is from a GI JOE figure... Cyber Ninja, I think. I needed something to stuff the droid's head in, and it turned out pretty good!

Vlarra Gere will be a villain moving forward too; I figured with the main cast starting to age, it's time to introduce some new blood.


Jodo":36r85cxi said:
I can't wait to see where the story takes us now; reading this chapter makes me want to get back to work on my own, LOL.

Again - thanks for the feedback. It makes posting these worth it, knowing some people are still reading and giving feedback. I used to actually get a lot of emails on this series too from random people! I still get them from time to time, but I used to get questions/feedback weekly from people via email. Not so much anymore. Photonovel interest has dropped a lot. Oh well, as long as some of us still enjoy it!

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